Improvements for Double Page Spread

For my improved version of my double page spread I have included a lot more improvements to my first product. One of my first improvements was that I moved the text from the right hand side to the left hand side. I have kept both the main image and all the text that is used from the first double page spread i did. I have added a background colour which is the same as the front cover and the contents pages so that I keep the continuity of the house style through my work. I have added the design which i had used on the front cover which is the line pointing upwards and across in the corner of the page. On the text for the newly improved one I have included bigger writing and red font for the captions for the customers to get a quick glimpse of this text when they are flicking through the magazine so that they might stop and read this page. I have added text over the top of the right hand side of the page where the picture is and this says "Relentless Spotlight Exclusive," the spotlight font is used on this page too say that the viewers know that this is their magazine. Below these big headings I have included " We speak to lead singer jay jay Mraz about why relentless are going to top the charts next year." This is a little brief so that the viewers can get a quick brief on what this page is about. One of the main things i have changed on this page is the i have used a brush tool on photoshop to edit the text and page from the main image this makes the image look like it has been torn off in the corners.